Sunday, December 6, 2009

Wishes




I wish i was good
i wish i was true
i wish i was cool
i wish i was brave

to survive any mood
to repay any due
to be no one's fool
to get anything i crave

i wish i was bad
i wish i was dumb
i wish i was scared
i wish i was dead

to never let me be sad
so i can make body to plain numb
to venture out, I would have dared
Enough done, enough said.

2 comments:

  1. this poem is not ur usual style...
    I feel that you wrote this just like that without giving any thought..feel you could have written this better.

    "so i can make body to plain numb
    to venture out, I would have dared
    Enough done, enough said."

    like these lines... the pic is awesome; suits you

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I really really care a lot for what you have to say about my writing...of course nothing is going to change my way...but it will be good to know anyway :P