Friday, November 21, 2008

STOLEN !!!

Stolen glances, hidden nuances
Moments of levity, of unforgettable brevity
Loved to be in each other’s solitude,
Uncomfortable in the multitude

Hesitant phrases of general talk
Awkward because of pregnant pauses
Secret glances at the clock
Wishing that time stood still for ages

Never wanted anything more
The feeling I used to ignore
Grew stronger inside me
I should have accepted it blindly

Some call it infatuation
Some call it just lust
Love just took time to awaken
This time around it’s honest.

3 comments:

  1. wonderful piece... love unleashed ... lucky girl to capture your heart..

    "Mirror mirror on the wall
    Who in this land is luckiest of all?
    You Manoj, are lucky; it's true
    But the young woman in your poem
    A thousand time luckier than you." :)

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  2. aiyo!!!!!!kavithai....kavithai....ayya shakespeare....DUDE!!!!!!!!!!! namma william ayya kitternthu namma palaya poem...unakaaga ellam unakaaga.....

    I wandered lonely as a cloud
    That floats on high o'er vales and hills,
    When all at once I saw a crowd,
    A host, of golden daffodils;
    Beside the lake, beneath the trees,
    Fluttering and dancing in the breeze.

    Continuous as the stars that shine
    And twinkle on the Milky Way,
    They stretched in never-ending line
    Along the margin of a bay:
    Ten thousand saw I at a glance,
    Tossing their heads in sprightly dance.

    The waves beside them danced, but they
    Out-did the sparkling waves in glee:
    A Poet could not but be gay,
    In such a jocund company:
    I gazed--and gazed--but little thought
    What wealth the show to me had brought:

    For oft, when on my couch I lie
    In vacant or in pensive mood,
    They flash upon that inward eye
    Which is the bliss of solitude;
    And then my heart with pleasure fills,
    And dances with the daffodils.

    - william wordsworth

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  3. True love comes just once in life time?

    "Hesitant phrases of general talk
    Awkward because of pregnant pauses
    Secret glances at the clock
    Wishing that time stood still for ages"

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I really really care a lot for what you have to say about my writing...of course nothing is going to change my way...but it will be good to know anyway :P