Why did you ever promise me
That you will never leave me
Why did you ever tell me
That you will always love me
Both of us knew that this cant really last
But both desperate to take it through
Things happened just too fast
Things went out of hand before we knew
Why did I ever promise you
That I will never leave you
Why did I ever tell you
That I will always love you
Who is at fault, neither of us knows
Who is to blame, neither shows remorse
The love that we had is still there latent
Although our thoughts and emotions are too distant
Is it all an act
Is it all in vain
Is it all a show
To hide away the pain
Is it just deceit
Who do we cheat
Why still together
When we are moving away farther
2 comments:
Nice work!!! I like how, quite fairly frankly, you question both yourself and the other person in the relationship. Good thinking!!!
You have balanced it quite well. Expressed quite crisply. You've rhymed it quite well. All good, frankly.
Overall, a fine work. A couple of alterations and this could be a good song. Keep at it!!!
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