YOU....
Only you
Can make my heart go light
Only you
Can hurt me in a fight
Only you
Your words mean so much to me
Only you
Can push me to break free
Only you
Live within myself
Only you
My reason for existence itself
Only you
Can make my breath go solid
Only you
Can make my knees go fluid
Only you
The only thought in my heart
Only you
My life’s joy you impart
1 comments:
Hmm, a decent attempt. Can be made better. This seems more like Hallmark lines than a poem. More childish. You know, there is a slight difference. A few rhymes seem forced into which is not always good. No offence.
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